My MoSt EnDeArInG QuAlItY Is My AbIlItY To MaKe SoMeOnE FeEl BeTtEr AbOuT ThEmSeLvEs By BeInG So TeRrIbLe At EvErYtHiNg. I CaN't EvEn TyPe CoRrEcTlY. WoE Is Me, ThOu ShAlL PiTy ThIs HuMbLe OnE, If YoU CoUlD.
I believe this is a metaphor of sticking it to the man. No one is perfect, so you gotta make yourself known, make yourself stick out. I enjoyed the artistic direction you chose as the story advanced, great work 10/10
Constructive = I don't know if you did the whole caps and no caps thing on purpose, but I had to reread many words because of it. It took me longer then it should've to read through the story. Positive = other than that, this was good
I believe this is a metaphor of sticking it to the man. No one is perfect, so you gotta make yourself known, make yourself stick out. I enjoyed the artistic direction you chose as the story advanced, great work 10/10
ReplyDeleteConstructive = I don't know if you did the whole caps and no caps thing on purpose, but I had to reread many words because of it. It took me longer then it should've to read through the story.
ReplyDeletePositive = other than that, this was good